Ultimate Warstory - Where is it?

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Post by Adrian » Sun Jul 11, 2004 10:41 am

I'm not gonna be another USSA, but I'm kinda wondering where wetmonkey's warstory went. I checked the Aqua Warriors board, which is where I thought it was...no such luck. Are you gonna continue it here?

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Post by wetmonkey442 » Sun Jul 11, 2004 11:03 am

I really don't know. Uh...I might continue it. If I do, I am probably going to wait a bit until the story sia bit longer before posting it. I'm glad that you guys remember it. :D
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Post by wetmonkey442 » Sun Jul 11, 2004 11:23 am

I posted the story. More to come soon. I ask anyone who is reading this not to post comments on the Ultimate Story thread. Post any comment here. Thank a lot.



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Post by leprekan » Mon Jul 19, 2004 9:49 pm

that's not it. wetmonkeys is over 50 pages size 12 on 8 1/2 x 11.

speaking of which, where is the rest of the story??????

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Post by USSA » Wed Jul 21, 2004 12:45 pm

yes i am also really wanting to read!! except i don't want to pressure the all holy wetmonkey as stress may slow his brain power and in turn his writing .... i repeat do not stress the monkey as this may cause him to do horrible things (like take that barney idea)

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Post by leprekan » Wed Jul 21, 2004 4:21 pm

news on the story: wetmonkey's computer got some virus or something and he has no internet access. will be seeing him tomorrow; if he has more written I will tell him to bring a floppy and I will post it. :;):

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Post by USSA » Thu Jul 22, 2004 12:38 pm

that you you kind considerate gentleman... i shall be in your debt :p

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Post by CPS » Thu Jul 29, 2004 3:58 am

i just read it and its like he read my mind, with the water howitzers, water machine guns and water tank, now i have to think of more things for the story im in the middle of writing
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Post by Nick » Tue Aug 03, 2004 10:44 am

How the #### did you have the time and imagination to write 50 pages on a water fight?!???

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Post by Veteran » Tue Aug 03, 2004 10:49 am

He just kept writing, it's what writers do.

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Post by leprekan » Tue Aug 03, 2004 5:14 pm

wetmonkey has internet again, but im not sure why no story. he hasn't written more.

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Post by wetmonkey442 » Thu Mar 24, 2005 9:07 am

More has indeed been written fellow water warriors. Trying to make the rest a bit more realsitic :goofy:

60 some odd pages in Word.

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Post by Adrian » Fri Mar 25, 2005 3:28 pm

It feels a little forced and like it's taking itself a tad too seriously. The number of players that are involved is unbelievable...+200 in just one group doesn't seem realistic.

That said, you've done an excellent job writing. I and several other people are constantly looking forward to the next installment, and that means you've got a fan following - quite impressive.

Oh yeah...you get hit in the head hard enough to knock you out, it's quite likely you're gonna have brain damage or wake up dead (so to speak). Knockouts aren't what you see on tv.

Keep up the good work!

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Post by wetmonkey442 » Fri Mar 25, 2005 3:58 pm

Actually, I never said he was knocked unconcious. Just stunned.

And I'm getting a bit tired of people telling me my story is unrealistic. It's not even that improbable. About 600 people in all isn't that many considering the number of people who can organize in large scale events for other hobbies. I believe once this hobby grows popular enough, we can expect to see battle with hundreds of people. You underestimate the organizational ability of several determined individuals :goofy:

Thanks for the kind words and comments.

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Post by Adrian » Fri Apr 01, 2005 3:10 pm

Yeah...you're right about the troop count. Immediately RIGHT NOW it's kind of unrealistic, but it may not be in the future given certain cultural climates.

Keep it up! :D

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